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NIKON CORPORATION
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Landsknecht by Adhras Landsknecht by Adhras
Learning to draw. This is my first drawing that i have the courage to publish. I accept critics and tips :)
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:iconmichieltjeeh:
Michieltjeeh Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
May I ask form wich country you are =] ?
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:iconadhras:
Adhras Dec 17, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Italy, and I love the europe renaissance period ^^
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Michieltjeeh Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome! I am from the Netherlands and I like the europe renaissance too ^^
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Adhras Dec 19, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
:)
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Ebillan Nov 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
In a general sense, learning anatomy and perspective/foreshortening will immediately make you a much better artist. Even if you are drawing from references, understanding what you're looking at on a technical level will drastically improve your artwork c:
I hope this helps a little
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Adhras Nov 4, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thank you so much, today i have buy two books with basic techniques (figure and potraits). However, until three days ago I knew how to do just a stick man, I hope that the improvements continue at this rate :)
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Ebillan Nov 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, it's not bad at all for someone just starting out! The only major problem you have in this picture is the foreshortening, which people in the first year of my art program had trouble with- and my program isn't exactly easy to get into! These are all people who have been drawing for years! c:
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:iconvorokoth:
Ok. One thing you could improve is the arm pointing at the viewer. Since the arm is sort of circular in cross section, the edge of the glove should look mostly circular, rather than straight up-and-down as you've drawn it.

I've also found getting a book on drawing the Human figure very useful.
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Adhras Nov 5, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
You are right, thank you.
However yesterday i have bought two books with basic techniques (figure and portraits). Hope to improve soon :)
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